Writing Experiment

[the_wanlorn]

 
I'm experimenting with a new writing style. Comments? Thoughts?

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I'm making out with my boyfriend. I know I'm making out with my boyfriend and I like it and it feels good and I don't want to stop but I can't stop singing that song in my head.

Only in Kenya. Only in Kenya. Only in Kenya.

I'm a broken record that just won't stop and I guess it shows or maybe I hum a bit because he stops and looks at me. I think he loves me or adores me and he doesn't know, I can see he doesn't know.

"What are you thinking about?"

How do you tell your boyfriend that you love him but you were singing a song, a fragment of a song, only in Kenya? You don't. I make up something sweet and put my hand down his pants.

He feels like Kenya.

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Yes? No?

Comments

[emiweebee.livejournal.com]

Oh I like rambly sentences. Big fan.

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And if you throw in a shoutout to the Kenya song, how could it be wrong?

[chaosvizier.livejournal.com]

I'm never making out with you again. ;-)

[gaslightgallows]

Well, I'm impressed, although we all know how much my opinion matters.... :-P

[katiefoolery.livejournal.com]

I like this sort of style. The story itself was quite hilarious, too, especially the last line there.